"It wasn't just an old coat", Mr Crowe shouted. "The pockets were full of treasure!"
Mr crowe is an old man. He put some important things in his an old coat. But his daughter put it out the garbage truck. Mark heard their conversation. So Mark decided on find the old coat. Mark had followed the garbage truck. Mark cycled over to the pile of trash. Finally, he found the old coat! Mark spread out the coat and emptied the pockets. There was an old fob watch, a faded photo yong woman, locket, bottle tops and a shark's tooth.
Mark gave Mr Crowe the old coat. Mr crowe was very happy because he could look at the faded photo. I thought that the photo was his wife or daughter. This story made me happy too.
120 words
THE COAT
THOMSON ISBN 9780170126618
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